First Contact - Day 188:5 Minute Freewrite
First Contact
Aspire spent a whole century staring into the vast expanse of space. One eye on her Jupiter ring enfolding her, another at the dark abyss, and the last at a spinning ball with different landscaping. She mooned over her eternity without amusement and companionship. She is independent and wise. Left to drift and absorb the lights of stars and galaxies. She traveled the expanse of the universe and absorbed all the interesting happenings she desired. For fun, she thought shooting stars to the earth and clapped as the spun out and fizzled below. Yesterday she tuned her sensory in to a repeated message to the inhabitants of space.
"Is there life out there? Please send a message with your coordinates."
Aspire smiled, the first one since her creative unit dropped her here to tend this world.
"Yes," she transmitted through her brain waves, "there is life in the galaxy. Prepare a vessel for me with ramen soup and murcurial mud. I will arrive in June."
All three eyes closed and reopened as Aspire focused on the spinning planet below.
This ends today's 5 minute freewrite prompt. This is a photo prompt by @loliboofae
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Great imagery! Quite lonely your alien, but then we earthlings have to live with the idea of being alone in the Universe...
Oooh, intriguing take on the prompt. I wonder if there really are aliens out there with any interest in us! How interesting that would be (assuming they didn't just want to disintegrate us)!
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Thanks @byn! I just don't see her as the destructive sort, but maybe that's just wishful thinking :) thank you for the comment and prompt!
I definitely didn't get any sort of destructive-ness from your character... that's just where my brain went at the thought of aliens coming to see us :) surprise surprise
Haha, I know what you mean, dear. hugs!
Wonderful! I love the brainwave communication.
That piece was so fun to write! The painting is so emotive. Thank you for reading and commenting.
I love this, it's so...inventive! I particularly liked what she did with her thoughts (For fun, she thought shooting stars to the earth - beautiful writing right there).
And it was so vivid, I could really imagine a bored, lonely creature out there :)
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Cool story. I like it.
Thank you for reading and commenting!
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