The Stall: Day 38: 5 Minute Freewrite: Monday - Prompt: Detective

in freewrite •  last year 

The Stall - Part 1
The Stall - Part 2
The Stall - Part 3


Mom grabbed the cage with the mice in it, handed the cage to me, and walked, with me behind her, to get in the check-out line. The door is not far off. "Mom, would you mind if I went to the car."

"Yes, I would mind. You are going to help me. I cannot carry all of this stuff by myself."

I could feel the sweat dripping down my face still. My shirt was a little wet. From the corner of my eye, I see a strange man looking at me from the front of the store where the exit is with dubious eyes and a penetrating stare, which made me feel more nervous than I had been. Looking him up and down, I notice a badge on his belt, a detective badge like the ones I've seen on T.V. He motions with his right hand that he is watching me, pointing two fingers at his eyes and then turning them around pointing toward my eyes. Something seemed strangely odd about this man.

detective-1832323_1280 (1).jpg


Freewrite brought to you by @mariannewest

Day 221: 5 Minute Freewrite: Monday - Prompt: detective

My Completed Freewriting prompts:

  1. Dude
  2. Bittersweet
  3. Basket
  4. Housecoat
  5. Nail
  6. Faster Than Light
  7. Cane (Bonus: Red Wine)
  8. A Ridiculous Amount of Fun
  9. Mosquito
  10. Bamboo
  11. Hook
  12. Sweater
  13. The Entryway
  14. Trolley
  15. Flea
  16. Awakening
  17. Her Homemade Jams
  18. Party
  19. Important
  20. Parasol
  21. Back Pain
  22. Late
  23. Medium
  24. Mother
  25. Banana
  26. Paper
  27. Milk
  28. Tree
  29. Swing
  30. Bored Stiff
  31. 5
  32. Home Alone and Doctor’s Office
  33. Monkey’s Wedding
  34. Wire
  35. Appetite
  36. Travel
  37. A Kiss
  38. Mice

Weekend Free Write:

  1. The Picture
  2. The Crooked Umbrella
  3. The Chair That I’m Stapped To
  4. The Stall - Part 1
  5. The Stall - Part 2
  6. A Common Ending
Authors get paid when people like you upvote their post.
If you enjoyed what you read here, create your account today and start earning FREE STEEM!
Sort Order:  

uuh this was a bit creepy, wasn't it? Wonder what the man's up to!

Aaand knowing you'd like to carry on in your freewriting adventure, here's your latest prompt:

Have fun with it!

Also, don't forget to read the latest posts from our new page

Click the graphic to join in the fun!

Who is he? Hmmm. I bet he was scared?

Who is who?