Magical realism: Day 482: 5 Minute Freewrite: Thursday

in freewrite •  8 months ago 

Magical realism is the way to open the third eye. Oh! boy.

I've been cluster before I do a freewrite for the last couple of month. I find it much easier to write something that looks and sounds good. Tonight though, I'm just going because I'd like to get to something else before I pack up for the night.

I don't like going to see Western doctors. They aren't trained to listen to you as a person. They are trained to see you as a money sign, and they need to see as many people as possible.

I've seen the doctor. She looks at me like I'm lying when I tell her of my chronic back pain. Then she sends me to a "specialist." Great, but what about the rest of the body areas I know I'm having trouble in? They've ignored this because my main issue that I complain about is the chronic lower back pain. They've yet to take a look at my shoulder, of which I've told them about.

Some of my pain may be because of the football injury I sustain in the seventh grade. A kid and I connect shoulder in practice. My shoulder made a ripping sound. For a couple of months, I could lift my right arm. Don't you think that there might be some issues with the shoulder since it wasn't properly taken care of back then? Don't you think that my lower back pain could be caused my a shoulder that is visible different from the other?

Oh! She'll gladly give a traumatize adult highly addictive drugs to help cover up the pain. If I wanted to be a drug addict, I'd love this. I mean, insurance, i.e. your money that I get for free because I'm homeless without a job, would be paying for me to be completely fucked up all the time! I can't use peoples money like that. I don't feel right just thinking about it.

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These days, most Western Doctors are glorified plumbers... lacking in the imagination and scientific curiosity that would have them regarding each patient as more than a "paint by numbers" or "fill in the blanks" or check this, that, and the other procedure off the list... I used to trust doctors. Now I don't even trust naturopaths. Even they sell overpriced, unregulated supplements while accusing big Pharma of pushing Rx for profit. All those expensive bottles of pills at the chiropractor and holistic doctor's office just don't earn my confidence. What is left? Diet and exercise and searching for medical practitioners who know what they're doing... good luck @tristancarax!

We definitely have to watch out for charlatans.

My distrust comes from the experience my mother had/has with them. This and that pill to fix this and that, which fuck up all these other things in the body. They'll have us not paying attention to these facts once they have you hooked.

Sending my positive vibes to you as I read this.


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