Day 25: 5 Minute Freewrite: Monday - Prompt: Banana

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Continuation of Late


Vick! Vick! Vick! - clap of the hands

“Vick!” Sam’s hands are waving in front of my face.

I’m back in my body now as my conscious comes back online. I’m laid out face down on the floor where I had fallen, after hitting the table hard with my head. I saw a smashed banna on the corner of the table, next to the blood stain. My head felt like it was going to explode all of a sudden. I wanted to scream out but the pain locked my vocal cords. My face contorted in all different directions and my face grew red hot. My body wasn’t obeying my command to move out of the position I’d fallen in.

Sam, petrified by my site and not sure what to do, frantically rushes to the phone and is dialing 9-1-1 when his parents come through the door laughing and touching each other, full of energy from the great times they spend together when out-on-the-town. It was then they saw the body on the floor and a head oozing out blood on a freshly recarpeted, white floor.



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Day 201: 5 Minute Freewrite: Monday - Prompt: banana

My Completed Freewriting prompts:

  1. Dude
  2. Bittersweet
  3. Basket
  4. Housecoat
  5. Nail
  6. Faster Than Light
  7. Cane (Bonus: Red Wine)
  8. A Ridiculous Amount of Fun
  9. Mosquito
  10. Bamboo
  11. Hook
  12. Sweater
  13. The Entryway
  14. Trolley
  15. Flea
  16. Awakening
  17. Her Homemade Jams
  18. Party
  19. Important
  20. Parasol
  21. Back Pain
  22. Late
  23. Medium
  24. Mother

Weekend Free Write:

  1. The Picture
  2. The Crooked Umbrella
  3. The Chair That I’m Stapped To
  4. The Stall
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What a thing to come home to!!!


So much for a night ending well.

Wow that was quite a trip! Also, a beautiful picture - it took me a bit to realize it's fruit lol
Love what you did with yesterday's prompt ;)

I'm in charge of delivering the prompt for today, so here you go -

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After reading part 3, I had to come back and read parts one and 2. I am dying to know what is eating at Vick; what his secret is. I am loving this and hope it continues. : )


Thanks for the encouragement.

Thanks for letting me know about your continuation! Seems like all of that secret keeping has caught up to Vick.
Side note: you just had to make the carpet white, didn't you? ;)


You’re welcome.

Yep! White. I haven’t figured out if those parents were mad about that or not.