Day 14: 5 Minute Freewrite: Thursday - Prompt: TrolleysteemCreated with Sketch.

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I watched her get onto the trolly that was headed up the hill. A man had helped her in. Quickly I ran and jumped onto the back as the trolly began to pull away.

At first, I would have had trouble with the ticket gatherer if it wasn’t for the gun in my hand and the badge on my belt. He backed off with a quiet stare. He followed my gaze - he was overtaken by the woman’s beauty. I could see it in the way he moved. He darted after me. She had this effect on men of weak mind. I would have fallen off if it wasn’t for the bar slamming up against my back. I tossed the man out the back and off the trolly. His body cracked and thudded as he rolled on the ground. A blood-soaked street ...

I turned my attention back to the woman. Fuck! She was gone. That fucking prick! I’d been hunting down this woman for weeks on end without a thing in my belly. Now she has vanished. I’d have no clue as to where to hunt next if it wasn’t for the letter addressed to me I found at my feet when I looked down.



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Day 196: 5 Minute Freewrite: Thursday - Prompt: trolley

My Completed Freewriting prompts:

  1. Dude
  2. Bittersweet
  3. Basket
  4. Housecoat
  5. Nail
  6. Faster Than Light
  7. Cane (Bonus: Red Wine)
  8. A Ridiculous Amount of Fun
  9. Mosquito
  10. Bamboo
  11. Hook
  12. Sweater
  13. The Entryway

Weekend Free Write:

  1. The Picture
  2. The Crooked Umbrella
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This was excellent! That end was chilling!

his body cracked and thudded as he rolled on the ground. A blood-soaked street ...

And she was gone!



More please. I'd like for this to continue now. Chop chop!


Lol ... Let me see what I can make of it. No promises.

Wow, that was so intense! I'd love to hear more!

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