Day 34: 5 Minute Freewrite - Prompt: Big Wave
Here is my Day 34: 5 Minute Freewrite - Prompt: Big Wave
A big wave of emotion came over her as she looked into the eyes of the man she loved.
She has waited for this day her whole life, knowing that at some point it would happen.
The love she felt this day was unlike any other. It was a hurricane swirling around her. She was surprised people were able to stand so close as her insides were twirling like a ballerina.
The music started to play, ending the ceremony, but she didn't want it to end. She grabbed his hand, she loved the feel of his hands so strong and comforting when she was upset about something.
As she grabbed his hand she noticed how cold it was ............she looked at him again in the eyes, this time taking care to really look.............
What she saw there made her heart stop beating. She said his name. It must have been louder then she thought. All of a sudden, there were people running to her from all over the church.
Art by Pexel
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Oh no! Was he dead? Or did her heart literally stop beating? Tip!
I don't know. I was very happy to hear the timer this time! loll I didn't want him to die and was afraid to write more. :D
Thank you @whatisnew for the tip and commenting and reading!!
Isn't it funny how sometimes we are NOT in control of what we are writing lol
It is!!!
That is interesting. I didn't want him to die either!
The pleasure was all mine. : )
No......!! What happened? The timer is going to get a piece of my mind for stopping you..
hehehehehe :D Thanks for reading!! You made me laugh!
oh. what a turn.....https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-35-5-minute-freewrite-prompt-bittersweet
Oh yes, absolutely dead! Dead dead dead!, But wait, is that the sounds of prayers? Yes, and there is your neighbor the fireman parting the crowd... 😎
I love it! death and resurrection!
Oh I like that story!!! It was an abrupt ending! I think if his hand was cold, he might be dead....
but I didn't want him to die :(
Oh! This gave me such goosebumps...is he ok? Good work in such a short time!
Thank YOU so very much :D