Cigarettes | 5 Minutes Freewrite - Day 104
The cigarettes smoke just filled up the room as a old man walked in.
He had a black hat and a big cigarette in his mouth and a thick fog surrounding him.
I felt the lung thicken and started to caugh and had a hard time breathing.
I walked out took my coffe to go,
finally fresh air!!
As I walked down the street after drinking my coffe,
I saw the same man and another cigarette in his mouth.
He took the cigarette between his fingers and took up his keys and opened his car door.
Got in and putted the cigarette in his mouth again....
I started caughing again just thinking about it.
Thick cigarette fog surrounding you making it hard to drive and breath... how does he do it?
Good thing I never smoked and I feel sorry for those who do and want to quit.... good luck!
Mr cigarette got shorter and shorter as the man kept smoking...
Please stop it hurts me 😣 Mr cigarette says!
But the man payed no attention and it kept glowing as he smoked.
Stop smoking me I'm about to dissappear in ashes.... 😔
Again the man ignored his wishes.
Mr cigarette started to glow tremendously and got really hot... the mans reaktion was instant and he threw the cigarette out as he got burned.
And he walked away.
I picked up Mr cigarette and looked at him.
Im so sorry I have to put you out before I throw you in the trash..... He nodded and the next moment he was gone and now in the trash!
My father has always been a cigarette addict. He can smoke 2 boxes of cigarrette in a day. I didnt like the idea because my mother's asthma is triggered if she breathes smoke in the air. She will start coughing hard, and so do I.
He said that he would quit smoking, and until now, it is still a myth. He has never left this bad habit, not even a day.
I am happy though because in the Philippines, our President, Duterte is very mad at smoking. So, he might ban smoking in the country nationwide, but for now only few provinces and cities are doing this.
In time, we will have a free-cigarette smoke in the country.
That's a hard life my friend having a father smoking and a mother struggle with asthma. Not a good combination and not for a kid like you who needs to breathe it in everyday.
For those whos addicted it's not easy to quit but when the reasons are so many l would wish he tried 😊 thank you for sharing your life and I hope he find the strength someday to really quit I'm sure he would se a big difference.
Have a wonderful evening. Cheers!
I dont know how to put this into words. Should I be sad because my father no longer lives in the house because my mother and he have separated years ago or should I be happy because he is no longer at home.
But, the smoking was not the main reason of their separation. It was something more than that, and I know you know what could that be. :)
I understand that the separation probably had more to it than the smoking, sometimes life just doesn't go as we planned.
When it comes to your feelings you have the right to feel however you feel.
Happy or sad or mabye a little of both?
Relationships are not always easy my friend. Wish you a wonderful week. Cheers! 😊
Cheers! Good morning, from the Philippines.
Good afternoon from Sweden 😉
Hope you are having a wonderful day my friend. Cheers!
Now you've got me thinking about the life of a cigarette. 😂 I, too, am glad that I never started smoking them.
😁😁hahaha Yes that last part kind of just came to me after I was done... Lol
Just had to put that in here to. I am also glad I never started smoking and good you didn't eather 😉 good on us... Lol
Have a wonderful evening my friend. Cheers!
I am tempted to say, this"nonsens" makes sense. Haha
A lot of thoughts have been playing in your head. The #freewrite is fun. 😁
Thank you so much my friend 😊 sweet!
Yes a lot of thoughts and not enough space.. Lol
But I just wrote as I thought and I can't tell what I really think of the results.. Lol
Yes this freewrite is really fun and forces you to really think and train your writing.
Have a wonderful evening dear. Cheers!
Haha. I will look it up and see if it suits me.
You do that it's really fun 😉
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A good story to create awareness in society. Excellent job!
Thank you so much 😊 Really sweet. Have a wonderful day. Cheers!
So that is what a cigarette's life like... I liked it. It is a unique thought comparing it to other free writes I have read today.
Yes that's the life of a cigarette 😉 lol
Thank you so much, glad you liked it. Wasn't sure what to write as I'm no smoker myself so I guess I just wrote what popped up in my head.
Have a wonderful day. Cheers!
Wonderful day to you too. See you around.
No offense to those who partake, but I've always thought smokers are selfish. They chose to shorten their lives with every puff, but those who are in the vicinity are being dragged along with them. Second-hand smoke is something other people didn't choose to breathe, and yet we're forced to inhale it. I like how the plight of Mr Cigarette somewhat mirrored the casualties that smokers advertently or inadvertently take with them.
I totally understand what you mean about that, I always thought so to.
When you don't smoke yourself but have to inhale because of someone else, not fair as I didn't choose it.
Glad you liked it and it's a subject that has many opinions I'm sure.. Lol
Have a wonderful day. Cheers!
Omg
This is so funny
I will never smoke again :D
(Maybe because I dont smoke already lol )
😁 lol Glad you liked it and I completely agree with you. I will never smoke and never have so I'm good... Lol
Have a wonderful day my friend. Cheers! 🤗
I smoked for a little while 23 years ago but quit when I got pregnant. I couldn't stand the smell of smoke even when I DID do it, but liked the relaxation from it. I suppose it might have been healthier to smoke something illegal at the time instead.
Great freewrite... I like the different perspective that you took from the angle of the cigarette.
Also, I am here helping @mariannewest with freewrites today:
Here is Prompt 105
Thanks for writing with us!
@byn
Yes I hear that alot from people stop smoking during pregnancy and then starts again after or some don't. I feel you there 😊
Thank you so much for your kind words and I'm happy to write with you guys, really fun and cool to se many different storys in the same ptomp.
Happy Friday!
I am glad that Mr. cigarette went in the trash!!
Yes me too he needed to end up there.. Lol
Happy Friday my friend and thank you again for everything 🤗