Show me the way home
Show me the way home
I don't know where I have gone
I lost in this town
Without guidance
without friend
Everything looks cruel
like a night stared by an owl
like a road run over by a wheel
although sick and pale
I want to go home
show me the way home
so as not to get lost
lost carried away by the ghost
show direction
and definite destination
so that I step confidently
meet all happily
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thanks for this recommendation @nasreena
Thank so much for including me @nasreena
Beautiful writing, I really enjoyed this. I particularly like the part about the road run over by a wheel. Really interesting phrasing there. Keep writing ;)
Thank you so much @honeydue
I don't know why, but this line speaks to me, in all seriousness:
like a road run over by a wheel
and the sheer simplicity of these words, carrying so much power to move us:
I want to go home
show me the way home
Cool!
Thank you so much @carolkean
Nice and perfect poetry.
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Perfect and nice poetry.
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Am wishing you a very blessed weekend
love the rhyme and message of your poem
Your post has been recommended by @nasreena for my up-gage challenge
Thank you so much. It a honor to see you visit my post. I am so proud cause of it, @zephalexia