5min Freewrite - dry lips

in #freewrite6 years ago (edited)

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This is my entry for the Daily Freewrite Challenge hosted by @mariannewest. You can find the prompt here. Anyone can enter. If I can do this, you can too!

Check out the prompt post even if you do not want to participate. It is filled with all kinds of helpful tips and links.

Prompt: dry lips

  • Set your timer for 5 minutes
  • Start writing
  • Use the hashtag #freewrite and #freewritepoetry if it turns out to be poetry
  • Publish your piece (include a link to this post if you wish)

Garth's lips were dry. But it did not start out that way. It started with his throat going dry. Dry enough to cause some coughing. And make his voice sound uncertain. As time passed his mouth went dry and he kept moving his tongue around and licking his lips. Continually licking his lips brought him to the place where his lips were dry. And the dryer they became the more he licked his lips.

The coughing, the hoarse voice and the compulsive licking of his lips gave him a very nervous look. Some would say a guilty look. And yes, he was guilty. Very guilty. The thought of his guilt made him smile. He remembered the look on Mr Graham's face when he sat down on the whoopy cushion. The obscene sound broke the nervous silence in the room and the shock on Mrs Primrose's face was just as memorable.

Mrs Primrose was from the Department of Education and she was there to interview Mr Graham for a promotion. Mr Graham's embarrassment caused him to lose his temper. The things he threatened to do to the guilty party and the language he used disqualified him for any promotion. Mrs Primrose departed without a word, just a huff and a puff. It was a good result as Mr Graham was not a popular teacher and often too severe in the punishment he meted out for petty reasons to teens barely four years his junior.

But now Garth's lips were dry as he kept on flicking his tongue over them from a dry mouth. He's been waiting for nearly an hour now in front of the headmaster's office. He knew his punishment will be real.

The headmaster was Mr Graham's mom...

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Good story! As I've been down with a cold this weekend... starting with a dry throat and a cough, I was afraid of where this story might be going :) Then I remembered that not everyone is as morbid as me!

This was a truly interesting story and I love the ending! It could become quite a twisty story.

hahahahaa i laughed out loud at this!!!! LOL i didn't know where you were taking us ... thought maybe he was a bad dude that did something evil.... and then "whoopie cushion" started me laughing and i was entertained through the rest!!! LOL Thanks for the giggle!

If you'd like to see my dry lips entry... here it is :)
Part 4

I love Graham Crackers.

I wonder how the story will turn out after that... hahaha

Dry lips aren't fun. You captured them well in this piece. Who'd have thought you could take something so mundane and make a story out of it. You did it. :-)

Great twist at the end there 😂

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