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RE: Mom's Cousin Lenna, Part 9 - Day 602: 5 Minute Freewrite: Prompt: show me the way home
Carol @carolkean, you are able to put the reader right into the story and stand with DeLorean at the metal shed and look into Rory’s eyes.
Great descriptive scene with the dog.
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