No Butts About It

in #freewrite5 years ago

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No Butts About It


A knock on the door
It got louder each second.
Opening a crack
Not what she reckoned

A cigarette dangling
From surly lips she once knew.
He had been gone for years
And now wanted to be true?

A face with hard lines
Whiskey and women his song.
A question unknown
Why she stayed with him so long?

It was peaceful times
No ashtrays all over the house
No demeaning slurs
The only words from her mouth,

“Best be gone, you louse!”

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Hey Redheadpei, your poem was short to the point and entertaining. Loved it.

Thanks so much Angie! 😊

I love that there is a full story in here, but accomplished so quickly. Good for her - nobody likes being greeted by a dangling cigarette :)

Haha Ginny. So true! I’m glad you liked the story. 😊

Music to my ears when she said, "Best be gone, you louse!"
Congratulations Jo! You won 1-SBI for Butterfly Day and Insect Day Giveaway for Week 19. : )

I’m happy you liked the ending. 😊
Thanks so much @whatisnew for the SBI. 💕

My pleasure Jo! : )

Great one! 💕

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Thanks@wakeupkitty! 😊 💕

I'm reading a book right now about old ways of thinking, but I'm not going to finish it as it's written in the old ways of thinking. Don't know why I said this, maybe I'm tired of old ways of thinking...

We do learn from the past, Wales or it keeps repeating the old ways. 😊

Good for her!
Whether the door knocker was her habit coming to call or a human louse, I'm glad she persevered
Great freewrite poem.

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Thanks Owasco and for delivering the prompt. 😊

Yes! Great poem for anyone who has been in a relationship with a waste of space :)

Thanks @raj808! Relationships are complicated and this one literally bit the dust. 😊

Dang I better quit on those ciggies soon. Loved the poem very enjoyable story like.

Thanks so much @wtersnake101! It’s not easy to quit. I’ve known people to have acupuncture to try and stop smoking 😊

hahaha! perfect. She was smart!

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