Day 189: 5 Minute Freewrite: Thursday - Prompt: cane

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From the Isle Of Write. Today is day 189 of the 5minutes freewrite and it has been a very great experience. You can also join in here and be a part of this great thing.
Thursdays Prompt: Cane.
Set your timer to 5minutes, explore your creativty and be you.
My time starts now.

Cane, what a beautiful instrument
correctional facilities, here is your answer
spare the cane and spoil the child,
use the cane and train your child
a goat, your child is not.
but when he acts like one cane him.
do not undersestimate the power of the cane.
the cane, changing lives since the begining of creation.
Adam and Eve were caned, not with a rod, but by being naked,
so when i say cane you child, does not have to be a rod.
your words are cane,
use your words as a cane.
but remember, speak wisely,
and in your times of anger,
cane with brain.

Hello to all at the Isle of write, i am happy i am doing this, am proud to have come on board. Thank you @mariannewest for inviting me to nthis awesome task.

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You have a minor misspelling in the following sentence:

the cane, changing lives since the begining of creation.
It should be beginning instead of begining.

Well, the cane was used for guiding and later abused for hitting. Words are a good way to explain and guide.

Yes Ma'am.
When a rod cane is used, one may vest his or her anger on the fellow and never pass the lesson to whom you are caning.. Thank you for stopping by ma'am

So many lost lessons ....

hopefully we all learn to. be better teachers.

I loved how well this flowed!


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Thank you very much maam.

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