I definitely want to know what the incident at the bar was. There are so many questions I have about this story, but the feelings we all know very well, or hopefully we have had the hunger for another that these two do.
The dialogue layout is cool. It makes the other seem kind of other-worldly somehow. The story is very titillating. I like it
It's among the things or stories (if it qualifies to be called such at all) that crop up in my mind and I ignore on grounds of their unworthiness.
Thank you so !