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RE: The Storm

in #freewrite6 years ago

This was a sad story @byn. When I read the story, I felt the hopeless of sarah. Although she sense something not right, but she always motivated herself by painting some happy moment. But sad enough, the truth always drop by until the last breath of her which she knew that it no more hope. The only thing she could do was sleep peacefully beside her mother until the time come.

You have express the emotion well in a short story of yours, i love it very much. You always write this type of story? The storyline goes so well.

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