day 136 5 minute freewrite : Belt

in #freewrite7 years ago

This is my first attempt to do a freewrite

This is being https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-136-5-minute-freewrite-sunday-prompt-belt@mariannewest

The Belt

I winch as I ready myself from the pain. The leather belt strikes my naked ass with a loud crack. She winds it again the air swishes as she delivers the 2nd slap. I try not to cry out because it will prompt her to hit harder.

Why was I here again? Because I stole a few coins from her purse. I was hungry and I wanted something to eat. Was it so wrong?

3rd slap and I could feel the tears rolling. My knuckles white as I held on to the table to keep myself from falling. I remember falling once and received a kick in the stomach.

One whip for every peso stolen she said. What was I to do? How I wish she was here so that I would be punished like this.

On the 7th stroke I let out a cry and she paused. Did some instinct kick in? Then I felt metal crack my back. 12 more lashes to endure then....

Thank you for this opportunity and all of this is just fiction.

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Awesome!! 👏 very well written @nikkimariel!

Thank you so much

I was wondering how far, how harder the lashes were going to keep going! It is a good read.

meanwhile here is today's prompt from @mariannewest

https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-137-5-minute-freewrite-monday-prompt-witches

Thank you for the prompt!

wow. That is intense!!!
Welcome to the freewriters. We are glad to have you!

Thank you so much Marianne! I really enjoy your freewrite challenges

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