World's Greatest Fumigators (5 Minute Freewrite)

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Prompt: Fumigate

Three brothers have been building up their business for over 5 years. Their job, fumigation. Any bug or creepy crawly will do. If it bugs you, it is gone.

One day they get a call from a man called Antony. He presents a TV show about badly run hotels.

“Good morning,” says Antony. His tone is sharp. “We need fumigators, the best. We have a hotel in Ireland, it is not fit for humans. Can you do the job?”

“Of course.” replied one of the brothers. “What hotel is it?”

“I'll message you the details.”

The details come to the phone. “That's a famous one. Global leaders are known to use the hotel. We better be good.”

They arrive the next day at the hotel in Ireland.

“Can you get rid of all the vermin?” asks Antony. Again, he doesn't mess his words. His tone is sharp. Maybe that is why he is on TV.

“I'll be back in 3 days. Do a good job!”

Antony arrives back at the hotel 3 days later. There is a problem.

“He's gone. The President of the United States has disappeared,” shouts one of the hotel staff.

“The President staying here?” asks a concerned Antony.

“Yes, now he's vanished. It will hit the news soon.”

Antony has his hand on his forehead. This might be the challenge that fails.

Then cars and vans all arrive at quick speed. News reporters and photographers in their numbers. General members of the public also join the gathering.

Antony then looks at the entrance to the hotel. The 3 fumigators appear in grey overalls. The crowds are cheering and throwing them flowers.

“What did you do to the president?” asks Antony.

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lolololololol. Yep.

I didn't like the original story I wrote, but I may publish it as a deleted scene. :-)

ahahaha I totally saw it coming! The president has vanished! Yup, the vermin is gone. hahaha, clever one!

I'm glad you like it. :-) Thank you.

A nicely spun yarn @mr-neil

Thank you. :-) I'm glad you enjoyed it

I wonder what happened to the President. ^^

I do to, hehehehe :-D
Maybe I could do a sequel

Would love that ^^ Don't forget to tag me. I'm curious.

I may not follow this up, but I do love writing comic capers. This conversation has given me an idea. Watch this space. :-)

Great job!!

Do you mean me? Or the Fumigators? :-D

hahaha - I wished!!! And a bunch of others with him...

Nigel Farage maybe (or Nigel Fuhrage as some people like to call him). I wonder if this is an inspiration to write another comic caper series.

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