Callous! (5 Minute Freewrite)
Prompt: Callous
5 whole minutes, you’re having a laugh.
I wouldn’t want to spend 5 seconds thinking about you, but it would take me 5 hours to express all the words in my mind and my soul.
You are callous and cruel and you have no soul. You cheat and you lie, I have no more trust for you. The lies you tell are not little white lies. They are black king size porky pies.
It is shocking, because I thought you were so nice, but now I see right through you and you are as cold as they come.
There is no redemption for you. You’d sell your own mother if it would give you a higher status. But that status is plastic, because you don’t have the heart for good.
I think you’re so bad, I’d rather spend the afternoon drinking tea with Cruella de Vil. You make Morgana look like Mary Poppins; but you are not perfect in any way.
My writing hero is Roald Dahl, the greatest ever teller of short stories and a man who would create a mind blowing twist.
But the twist of this story is that there is no twist. There is no hope for you and the day will come when the Devil will have to up his game.
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Task set by @mariannewest
Link
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-74-5-minute-freewrite-prompt-callous
Great post i love your post @mr-neil
Thank you so much :-)
Wow. This creature needs to be obliterated from the face of the earth.
I have to say that I enjoyed it, was the freewrite cathartic for you @mr-neil? :-)
It is pure fiction. ;-) Maybe there's a person in my mind.
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Yikes! Cruella-esque little deviline! Great free-flow on callous. 100% upvoted and Followed you!
Thank you, this one was fun.
Thank YOU! You inspired me to participate! Here's my "Callous" entry:
https://steemit.com/dakini5d/@dakini5d/entry-for-today-s-5-minute-free-write-day-74-callous
I love Roald Dahl!! And sometimes, it just is what it is.
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-75-5-minute-freewrite-prompt-dog-hair
I call this one a 'heavy metal' freewrite. I confess that I enjoyed this a lot.