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RE: Five minute free write - Witches

in #freewrite6 years ago

A really cool write. I wish there was more…

A few helpful editing notes:
One of [humanity’s] bad habits
by leadership [long] ago
the world… life and stuff (you forgot a space behind the ellipse)
an angry elder god [who] feels
A god [who’s] gonna

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Hehe, most of these 5 minutes free writes I whip through pretty fast only looking for the major edits. I doubt most people read more than just the story anyways. But, thanks for the editing advice! Helpful when I write longer, more thoughtful pieces :)

Nuts to that - if this is a freewrite then the focus is the word "free" ergo - we don't have to edit! We just write as it flows onto the page and leave it there in it's entirety and beauty!

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