Hehe, yep, in five minutes. The bolding and such was an afterthought that I went back and did to put focus on certain things.

And, it's an interesting point you make about the pronouns. I didn't think about it too much as I wrote, mainly just let it flow, so, that's how my subconscious was working and wanted the flow to go. Changing them up could definitely change the meaning. Words have powerful meanings, especially when we change the direction of them.