Five minute free write: Elephant
Another day, another 5 minute free write to get my brain moving.
The focus of todays 5 Minute Free Write was elephant. It took me a minute to think about what I could write about. For me, elephant was a bit of a reach. I haven't been to zoos for a long time, and I think it's a pretty obscure focus. But, a vivid memory of the time I was visiting Thailand, in a city called Ayutthaya with my girlfriend at the time, arose. I had been backpacking for about 4 months at this point, and she decided to come and visit me. Instead of doing the whole explore Bangkok thing, I wanted to be more creative. So, instead we took a day trip to the ancient religious ruins in Ayutthaya.
This is a quick tale weaving that ride together with some of my thoughts about how the elephants are treated. Written in The Most Dangerous Writing App where the only edits made were a couple spelling, and one tense correction. I hope you enjoy it!
Have you ever ridden on the back of an elephant?
Deep in the jungles of some unknown land? Where ruins of old cover the countryside?
I have.
Large beasts of burden, gentles of heart. The trunks always snaking round and round, seeking.
Dressed in orange and saddled with seats. 'Driver' seated in front with large smile beaming.
Tourists we were, in a foriegn land. Seeking novelty and experience.
These lovely beasts, saddled in their servitude, do not deserve to be there. I did not know it at the time, but how they came to be in this awkward position of serving man was not a gentle journey towards something better.
Training, days upon days, years upon years, they struggled through it. Tied, beaten, abused. Not trained, but forced into submission to the desires of man..
To make a living? To provide entertainment? One by one, two by two, they were brought into the human fold
But, I rode, not knowing. The fun had not yet been dimished. We sat, moving back and forth in a lazy side to side step of this gentle giant.
Through ruins of old we wandered. In places many will never see, doing things many will never do. Enjoying the time that we had without the cloud of knowledge to smother our light. Yet still these beasts, no, not beast, lovely gentle fellow inhabitant of this great planet.
All of us together, on this rock flying through space. One above, one below.
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Thanks for reading!
Michael
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Hey, I wrote about my Thailand elephant-riding experience too. It was the first thing that came to mind as soon as I learned the prompt for today. Lovely pictures you have there too.
Hehe, great minds think alike :) Did you write about it as well? If so, leave a link :)
A very beautiful country. I would like to come one day.
Thailand is an amazing place with so many things to see and experience :)
Great story... But the pictures, oh the pictures... They look amazing :)
You are good at freewrite, and fast. I can't make so much text in such short time, I think too much, so my freewrite pieces are much shorter than yours.
What a beautiful elephant. And I feel terrible for how these elephants are treated. I have watched documentaries and in my heart I grieve for them. There are too many things that happened behind closed doors. Thank you for you're freewrite.
I share your feelings for the poor animals..
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Yeah, I saw a couple documentaries afterwards. But, I don't know how these elephants were treated, it was just something that came to mind with this focus, hehe. Hopefully, they were treated well.
Me too.
I feel like watching more of your shots.. compliments and very well written freewrite! Welcome to the freewriters zoo 👍😁
Awww, thanks! Yeah, lots of travel posts will be coming. I have a lot of memories I want to share that have never been heard before.
Put them in freewrites as you did with this one 😉
I might just...but it of course depends on what the focus of the free write is, hehe. :)
This is a fantastic poetic expression of the journey and elephant. You are genius Mike. Hope to read more from you.
Awwww, thanks. I'm not a genius, I just try really hard :)
This is a great poetic expression of elephant and the journey. You are genius.
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Great story and pictures. I loved your writing style.
Thank you so much! Still a lot to learn about how to write well :)
That will come naturally, the most important thing is to have fun
sad story but at least at the time you got to enjoy it!!!
Yeah, that's how I view it. That was a wonderful memory I had of the time, and even learning afterwards shouldn't change how I viewed what happened.