Prompt- my shoe got stuck in the mud

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Day 61: 5 Minute Freewrite - Prompt: my shoe got stuck in the mud

Let's go for a hike, he said.

No, just a short one, he said.

I know a great trail, he said.

It was a warm afternoon, but we were in the woods and the trail would be shaded. Bug spray was a must.
He wore a small daypack with a couple of water bottles in it. The wildflowers along the trail
were beautiful to see.
I knew there were bears, I had just seen one on my morning walk yesterday and we both turned tail and ran the other way, so I wasn't making any effort to be quiet. I wanted my presence known, and we were an hour or so back into the deep forest.

And then my shoe got stuck in the mud. It hadn't rained in weeks. I pulled it loose with a slurp, and kept on walking. And then I came to puddle, but I walked around it. The next puddle was bigger.

Come on, he said.

We are almost back to the road, he said.

And the next puddle was up to my knees. I could no longer see the trail. I was climbing over fallen trees, hidden in the now thigh deep water.
.
That shouldn't be water here, he said.

It's an hour back, he said.

The roads just over there, he said.

Keep going, he said.

And that's when I saw the newly built beaver dam. The little creek was now a shallow little lake.that covered the trail.
Expect the unexpected in the woods. Even when it's not a bear!

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soo, bug spray now works on bears? is that right? ;)
Great writing, star points hun WELL done :D

They are usually as afraid of you as you are of them, but mosquitoes? They are afraid of nothing!! Thanks so much!

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You just never know what you might find in the woods, especially with the way things have changed so much. Tipu is working again. Tip!

Thanks for the tip. Glad to see it is back up!

You have a beautiful nature. The story turned out great)

Thanks for reading it!!

Beautiful! Tip!

Oh my goodness! What a wonderful Christmas surprise to wake up to this morning , my friend! A tip and a big boost! Thank you so much! And Merry Christmas to you!

You are very welcome, my friend!

what a beautiful picture!! And I love the story!!! Those beavers!!! :)
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Thanks! I never did go back to see if they were successful in creating their lake!

Oh, I am sure they did!! They kept our land irrigated - then we got rid of them and created all kinds of dry lands.....

@melinda010100 great post and I love this beauty picture ♥

Thanks! I do love being in the woods, but having dry shoes is best!

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