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RE: The Adventures Of Brior'Ador Part 2 - 5 Minute Freewrite - Prompt: rainbow
Very descriptive :) I particularly liked the bit where the lightning was swallowed by the oozey slime thing. I almost expected it to expand inside the belly and explode from the inside out! You did a good job at changing direction and offering the unexpected with the small portal summoning. :)
Thanks! I enjoy a nice twist in a story.