Day 232 : 5 Minute freewrite : Friday Prompt :Depression

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Angela was the only child lived with her parents in an apartment in Chile, her parents worked hard to give her everything she wanted, clothes, food, a 14 year old teenager, her parents went to work and came back at night, so angela Angela was alone in her house they left her food ready for her to warm her in the microwave, went to high school and when she returned she was alone and did her homework alone without anyone's help when her parents came back in the night, they were tired and they did not have time to listen to their daughter, they never hugged her or kissed her any show of affection they only gave her what was necessary for her to live, so Angela got depressed and passed her in her room, she did not study anymore because she did not have she decided to study or eat, she did not have friends, her parents noticed her haggard and thinner so they took her to a doctor who was surprised to be diagnosed with depression, but her parents did not love her either, they say is a rebellious teenager and he just wants to get attention, so they hire a nurse to stay
She takes care of her, looks after her and talks to her. She is a good person and the nurse listens to her advice, they become good friends, soon after, the nurse resigns because her mother is seriously ill and has to take care of her, this leaves Angela still more depressed, her parents keep leaving her alone at home but one day they return and find angela dead in her room she had committed suicide with poison and a note in her hand said I just wanted a hug from my parents.

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So true that lack of physical affection can have such a big effect on people!

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What a sad story. and I am sure that happens to a lot of kids...

What a sad story.
And I am sure that happens
To a lot of kids...

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