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It’s all coming together, perfectly,
don’t you think?
Family, it has never been closer,
Friends, a bunch of them for the fuzzy feels,
Finances, in line with the advice of investment gurus,
with enough for your lifetime and the generations to come,
Fitness, up to the mark, not just strength but flexibility,
Future, arriving according to plan
But
Illusion never changed
into something real
To strive your whole life
to live the great American Dream,
and just when after many long years of toil
all the pieces start coming together,
magically arranging and forming themselves -
Just when everything seems to be coming together,
the puzzle of life
falls apart -
What is life then?
What is your life then?
Inspiration:
The first thing that came into my mind was this quote I came across today: "Illusion never changed into something real."
I decided it would be interesting to explore the intersection between illusion and reality, between dreams and real life.
If you have any thoughts or reactions to my writing, please leave a comment below! Resteems and upvotes are always appreciated (:
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I love your comparison of reality and illusion. Well written.
@wandrnrose7 Thanks alot for the encouragement! (':
Very welcome, my friend.
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Hi there @joeylim
That was very nicely written
Life is maybe always a journey... always a "coming" together...
I hope the next prompt will make the journey more pleasant
Here it is: music
@kaerpediem Thanks so much for your kind words! (:
Yes I'll definitely be responding to the next prompt as well!
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We are going to upvote a different post of yours since this one is past payout.
@freewritehouse thank you so much!! (: