Turbine: 5-Minute Freewrite Challenge
Good Monday afternoon lovely Steemians! I actually miss freewriting after being inactive for 2 days. This is a perfect time to go back to freewriting. The 5-Minute Freewrite Challenge was organized by @mariannwest. Today, the prompt is "turbine".
Feeling he winds gushing my skin
From the sea blowing some cold winds
Then I saw a couple having fun above the ship
Showing they really love each other
I saw on another side
Those men controlling the ship
However, the two men are looking at the other side
At the couple together
They are not doing their jobs
Then I heard something
It feels like turbulence
The turbine hits the iceberg
Commotion is happening
People are screaming
The ship is about to sink
I am disoriented
But someone took me to save me
I was transferred to the boat
I am watching as the ship sinks
Then afterwards it turned inclined
I saw its turbine which was wrecked
From the collision to the iceberg
Then it was divided into two and eventually
The unsinkable ship sank
What a sad story
To witness the tragedy
Which claimed lots if lives
You might be familiar of this story, and yes, you are right. It's about Titanic which first came to mine when I saw today's prompt.
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Beautiful poetry!
wonderful post
nice galing nyo naman sir mag sulat. di ko kaya yan haha antagal ko gumawa ng blog huhu
Sabi ko na nga ba Titanic yun eh lol yun agad pumasok sa isip ko...ang galing talaga ni Idol😊
Good post! 270% upvoted!! Thanks!
Awesome post! ang galing.gusto ko rin etry ang freewriting. :)
The important thing is, if you make a beautiful girl fall in love with you before the ship sinks, remember that in the plank ther's enough place for both of you! ;)
Today's prompt: https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-88-5-minute-freewrite-monday-prompt-see-below