Turbine: 5-Minute Freewrite Challenge

in #freewrite6 years ago

Good Monday afternoon lovely Steemians! I actually miss freewriting after being inactive for 2 days. This is a perfect time to go back to freewriting. The 5-Minute Freewrite Challenge was organized by @mariannwest. Today, the prompt is "turbine".


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Feeling he winds gushing my skin

From the sea blowing some cold winds

Then I saw a couple having fun above the ship

Showing they really love each other

I saw on another side

Those men controlling the ship

However, the two men are looking at the other side

At the couple together

They are not doing their jobs

Then I heard something

It feels like turbulence

The turbine hits the iceberg

Commotion is happening

People are screaming

The ship is about to sink

I am disoriented

But someone took me to save me

I was transferred to the boat

I am watching as the ship sinks

Then afterwards it turned inclined

I saw its turbine which was wrecked

From the collision to the iceberg

Then it was divided into two and eventually

The unsinkable ship sank

What a sad story

To witness the tragedy

Which claimed lots if lives


You might be familiar of this story, and yes, you are right. It's about Titanic which first came to mine when I saw today's prompt.


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Beautiful poetry!

wonderful post

nice galing nyo naman sir mag sulat. di ko kaya yan haha antagal ko gumawa ng blog huhu

Sabi ko na nga ba Titanic yun eh lol yun agad pumasok sa isip ko...ang galing talaga ni Idol😊

Good post! 270% upvoted!! Thanks!

Awesome post! ang galing.gusto ko rin etry ang freewriting. :)

The important thing is, if you make a beautiful girl fall in love with you before the ship sinks, remember that in the plank ther's enough place for both of you! ;)

Today's prompt: https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-88-5-minute-freewrite-monday-prompt-see-below

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