"stranded on the sofa like whales with a plankton's indigestion" -5minutefreewrite

in #freewrite7 years ago

For https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-88-5-minute-freewrite-monday-prompt-see-below

So many words to describe what it feels like when the floor is lava. The WHOLE FLOOR is flowing with lava. You thought it was a funny game when you were a kid, but these skills are REAL.

AND DANG. You're not as good as you were. When you were a child, you used to be able to leap from the sofa to the armchair and out into the kitchen, but now you are afraid. You will fall into the lava if you attempt such a feat. Youa re stranded on the sofa. No one can help you. You wave goodbye to your family, and you turn on the tv with the remote. Might as well watch the rest of Game of Thrones while you await your inevitable demise. At least you will know what happens.

Death is so sad. It's the end of learning. And you can't learn anything new. Even if the things you learned were trivial and useless, at least you learned them. All that dust of knowledge can accumulate into a rich fertile soil in which new ideas and ways to make the world a better place can grow, but once you are dead, buried in magma, you can no longer learn or teach...

Good bye joy of a child's smile. Good bye

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This is priceless!

All that dust of knowledge can accumulate into a rich fertile soil in which new ideas and ways to make the world a better place can grow, but once you are dead, buried in magma, you can no longer learn or teach...

Thank you for the wisdom shared.

My very great pleasure to have penned words that resonated. Funny how that can happen.

this is beautiful and so true.

I'm speechless.

Thank you for this!! it goes very deep and hit a cord with me!!

Aw! Isn't that a funny thing? These words salads can hit us.

Nooo the floor is lava!!! Great post really enjoyed reading it

We never played this. I think it's an American game. If I get another go at childhood then I'm in.

Although we played kerbsie, which was also cool, bouncing the ball off the opposite kerb, trying not to get run over.

Visual prompt. And a good one!
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-89-5-minute-freewrite-tuesday-prompt-check-below

Interesting! It's not a game, per se. But it's a childhood touchstone. Sometimes it's the sand that is lava on a playground. It's imagination playing.

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