Abrupt ending - I take it that's where your timer stopped? As I've said before, I just love your train of thought, particularly the beginning:
Let's talk about Ballet... Let's make up a story. First you talk, then I will. Oh you're silent?
It must be one of the coolest beginnings that I've ever read. It's just got this...flow. ;D
Also, here's your next prompt:
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-284-5-minute-freewrite-tuesday-prompt-mango
Have a great day!
thanks!