Freewrite Prompt: Describe Your Shoes

in #freewrite6 years ago (edited)

Part 3 of a fiction I have started:

Charlotte knew she had to go then. That night, she went to bed holding her cross, hoping nothing weird happen again.

The night went by without anything happening and Charlotte woke up from a good sleep.

"Silly me, everything must have its own explanation..." she thought to herself. "Let's go exploring the city today!"

Charlotte got dressed and went down to the kitchen to greet Mrs. Benett to let her know that her husband could go up to her room to change the old bulbs.

The only thing weird was her usual pair of shoes were missing. Yeah, her new pair of canvas sneakers. She had just got them before coming to the city and she loved them. They are red with the silver shoe laces that she likes, and Charlotte drew two little smiling suns on each side, symbolizing those were hers. She just likes to draw smiley suns on her belongings. Not making herself overthink, she put on another pair of older shoes, thinking she might have misplaced the red pair.

She wouldn't want to lose this pair of shoes because they had been the most comfortable pair of shoes she had so far. They made all the walking so easy and effortless. You know whenMarilyn Monroe said, "Give a girl the right shoes, and she can conquer the world", that's so true! Now, that's her pair of right shoes right there. She wore them with her dresses, she wore them with her jeans.

"Oh, Mrs. Benett, is there by any chance you see my red sneakers anywhere?" Charlotte thought she could just ask.

"How do they look like? Can you describe your shoes?" Mrs. Benett asked her back as she was kneading a bread dough.

"They are just red sneakers with silver shoe laces. There is a sun drawn on each side. Have you seen anything like that?"

"Oh no, dear. But you can always go to the yard to check it out. We sometimes have shoes thrown over from each side of the neighbour's house. Weird but yeah, see if you can find yours there."

As Charlotte was just about to go out, she thought she saw her red shoes at the back door. She went to have a look and saw it was really hers, with the yellow smiley sunshines on them! But to her dismay...

THEY WERE DRENCHED IN WATER AND MUD!

"Now, that's peculiar! I don't remember leaving them out or wearing them into anywhere muddy!"

Then, Charlotte heard the chuckles again.

What on earth?! Her goosebumps came up again immediately!

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The children followed her out !!?? ... Omg !!

What a lovely story! Great plot!

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Oh dear, this makes me recall one horror show called Chuckie. A toy doll who had life and it is wicked doll.

Hahaha I didn't watch Chuckie because I have always been avoiding horror shows, lol. Never have I thought I will be writing something of this genre. Maybe cos I don't watch them, I ran out of descriptions and words very easily :P Not sure where this leads, depending on the prompt each day, I guesw

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