5-Minute Freewrite Prompt: Detective

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"So, what is the thing that is missing now?" Morton asked as he put on his hat.

"It's my house keys. I'm pretty sure I had it with me just seconds ago," Mum was panicking and ransacking her bag, poured out the whole bag, found a lot of junks but just not the house keys.

"Okay, now when did you realize it's lost?" Morton continued on with his questions calmly.

"Erm, now? Will you stop asking and help me find them?" Mum was seriously impatient with all the questions.

"I am. Calm down Mum. Now where did you last see them?" Morton was not bothered by her impatience.

"I took them out right after I locked the car and I thought I would just hold them but your baby brother needed me to carry him, so I hung it over my fingers. But they fell off, so I passed them to...... "

"Yes, now the question is: Who did you pass them to? " Morton was still asking in a detective manner.

"YOU!!!! Come on, open the door, smartypants. You knew it all along, didn't you? But you just had to do it with all these questions you are learning from the detective movies! It must have been the Sherlock Holmes you watched." Mum was almost losing it.

"Hehe, yeah it is always the first thumb rule to ask the 5W1H questions. You aren't bad, Mum. We figured it out at 4Ws!" Morton exclaimed.

His mum almost facepalmed herself. What have her little boy become? He's been playing detective with her ever since she introduced Sherlock Holmes to Morton. He has become a great reader since then but it is starting to get on her nerves, especially when he could have just open the door!!!! Well, sometimes he's adorable, especially with his 6-year-old voice questioning everyone, it does sound like a little detective wannabe solving every mystery he can find around the house, including wanting to find out who took the trash out, analyzing the "clues" left behind.


Freewrite is a prompt writing initiated by @mariannewest and @improv to write a free-flow post without correcting or editing. I checked out her post to really get what it is before I jumped on the bandwagon. Basically, there is no right or wrong, just let the mind and fingers do their work, to find our creative self and let it come out of us.

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Oh! This is awesome! Most kids are actually like this, they ask questions. Can be annoying sometimes especially when it's answer it's far beyond what they could comprehend. You will feel like Awwwwww! It's enough 😂😂😂

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Well, it's always awesome when little ones discover a new passion thanks to a book. Sweet story <3

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Thank you @honeydue for coming by and delivering the next prompt!!! Glad you find the story sweet! :)

You left me intruiged. I also have a mini detective at home, I wonder what adventires they could get upto!

Hahaha you do? That must be so fun @thriftymum!! Hey, if you have not known about us, there is a group of mamas interacting and supporting one another called the @steemitmamas. If you are interested, you may join us here in Discord https://discord.gg/FzdmRJ :)

Cute little detective indeed 😉

Hehe sounds like your son, right? hahaha mine yet to start the questions yet :P

This is so cute. And it realistically happens a lot. We teach them something cute and then they use it to make us crazy!!!!

hahahahah your comment just made me LOL! @solarsupermama, thanks for cheering me up at the start of my day! Though this is actually a fiction, but my child is probably reaching that age soon!

Without question! The time is drawing nigh!

I can see him asking the questions. so cute!! and annoying lol.

HAHAHAHAHA yes, @mariannewest with him calm face but the mum panicking while flipping her whole bag inside out! :P

Haha, that is cute. I can just picture one of my kids saying this, and me, trying not to lose my cool because they are just learning and using their skills... ♥

Haha yes. We are the ones who will be tested. But then again, who can resist a smart speaking little detective? Hahaha thanks for always coming by @squishysquid 🐙

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