The Mouse Named Isabella ~ 5 Minute Freewrite ~ Prompt: mice

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Isabella was a kind mouse who lived in her small hole underneath a great oak tree in the woods. She loved her home. It was full of all the things she loved to collect. Small scraps of paper, bobby pins, thimbles, pen caps, broken pieces of ceramic dishes, plastic forks and knives, spools of thread, balls of yarn, and a nice tiny, pink pillow she liked to curl up on at night.

She liked to think she had plans for all of her treasures. The scraps of paper she would sow together to make books that would sit on the shelves she would build from small pieces of bark. She would create beautiful artwork with the broken ceramic, or even use it to make dishware that she could give to other mice. The thimbles could be used to make a communication device, where a string was tied from one to another, and they would be linked from one mouse home to the next.

But for now it all sat in a jumbled pile next to her front door.

She looked at it from her cushy bed, and sighed. She wondered if all of her crazy ideas would ever come to fruition, or if the other mice were right about her and all she was a collector of useless human junk. She couldn’t believe they were right. She was going to make something of herself, she just knew it!

Thanks for reading! I don't think I've ever done anything where an animal was the main character before, but it was fun! So...in honor of firsts for me, I want to do something a little crazy! I want to challenge @snook to write more of the story with tomorrow's prompt from @mariannewest! Now if she doesn't want to...it's okay...I'll only cry a little! Haha

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I'd say it was pretty good for your first animal story! Perhaps when Lola is complete, then you could start on an animal story?

Ah! Thank you! Writing this gave me a cuddly feeling!

hey @cecicastor... hehehe
I've asked @freedomtowrite to do this - and I'm asking you too :) My recruit for this week in Welcome Wagon is writing fiction - and I've told him that a great place for him to be ... is freewriting with a lovely group of people! :)

his name is @victorholyo - if you see him around... would you give him some encouragement ? :)

I'll be holding his hand - but I'd love it if other lovely Steemians would help too <3 (especially writers hehehe)

Thank you for considering it!

I will follow and give him some encouragement. No problems!

I SO appreciate it!!! :) thank you so much @cecicastor!!!! :) i think you'll really enjoy his energy :)

Cute little mousey!!

Haha thank you!

yes :D I would love to do the next part :D

Thank You!!!!!!!!!!

Yay!!! I'm so excited! Thank you!

I love this, and your writting here reminds me of Enid Blyton.

Wow, thank you!!

hehehehe were you the mouse? :)

I loved this - it had a very sweet feel - something to read to the kids at bedtime (but secretly love myself!!!)

I hope @snook takes you up on the challenge!!! :)

Haha no, but I would have loved her when I was a kid! And @snook totally did! She handed it off to @eroticabian, who did a great job and now it rests at the feet of @simgirl!

Ok, so this mouse could be called a Bruni, because we all have useless junk at our 🏠.

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