Cosmic Snoring - Il Russare del Cosmo [ENG/ITA 5 Minutes Freewrite]
From The Gardens of Edena (Moebius)
English Version
Saint Lawrence, an Augustan roof arched over time. Lying in silence, let's get back to children and play to catch the stars, parading like thieves in the sky.
Two neighbouring hearts are not afraid of the immense, looking back at our gaze, harmony of restless and sumptuous notes. The organ pipes of the infinite displaying his cruel magnificence in front of us.
What if this cosmic vibration - I ask myself - the unrelenting drift of galaxies, ancient of eons, what if all this was nothing else than the snoring of a dreaming God?
Versione Italiana
San Lorenzo, un tetto agostano inarcato dal passare del tempo. Sdraiati in silenzio giochiamo a far tana alle stelle che sfilano ladre nel cielo.
Due cuori vicini non hanno paura dell'immenso, che guardato ritorna indietro lo sguardo, armonia di note irrequiete e fastose. Le canne d'organo dell'infinito che si mostra ai nostri occhi assorti.
E se questa cosmica vibrazione, mi chiedo, il dilatarsi inesorabile delle galassie antico di eoni, altro non fosse che il russare d'un Dio sognante?
Dev'essere uno di quei sogni incomprensibili, senza capo né coda 😅
In un mio vecchio freewrite se non ricordo male avevo parlato del sonno di Dio...
Ecco, tu Marco l'hai fatto dormire e io russare hahah :-P
Grande! Voglio partecipare anche io! Honk! Honk!
Ooooooooooo GOOD Question!!!!
I was wondering how you were going to get snoring in there loll
and I bet this is even more beautiful in Italian.
Me and my wife always stay in her uncle's home roof on the 10th of August, looking at falling stars .. well in Italian It has a bit more of musicality ..Yes I was wondering about where to put snoring too hehe
That sounds wonderful!! is that your anniversary?
No that day here is dedicated St. Lawrence, the day in August where you can see falling stars..you can spot really a lot of them :-)
Very nice; a most lyrical snoring indeed.
Thank you very much. Somehow, it came half a poetry half a prose.
I love this so much!! I think you are on to something!!!
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/single-prompt-option-weekend-freewrite-december-9-2017
https://steemit.com/weekendfreewrite/@mariannewest/weekend-freewrite-6-december-9-2017
Thank you Marianne, who knows these may all be some ideas for a book.. I can say I'm happy about next one I'll write tomorrow. I'll do "The wave" entry but not in a conventional way..
I see several books coming out of this freewriters zoo. And you will certainly be one of the published authors.....
You make me smile..maybe those dreams of writing that book..who knows. This exercise awakened me in a way, I have to admit. It did something to my brain. "Awakening"..this could be a good prompt ;-)
okay -adding it :)
Yes indeed, what if? 🤔
Existentialist questions .. it's a nice exercise to remember at times that we are not the center of the universe 😉
My wife used to think that I was the center of her universe and she would tell people that all of the time, but then our son was born and she became an Existentialist like you. 🤔
hahah good one..Maybe that's what will happen with my wife too once we'll decide to have one. Sometimes we joke about it ;-)
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