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RE: Thai in Los Angeles - a stream of consciousness poem for Freewrite # 176 - curry
Like this is normal for us
When in fact
It's heaven.
How many times does this happen and how many heavens we can't see?
You wrote it like a paint, it has the minimalism and that feeling of capturing the moment of an haiku.
Thank you @f3nix! Not a very dramatic poem, but one where I was definitely trying for a snapshot of a moment in time. One of many, as you say :)