5 Minute Freewrite 7/26/18: movement
Untitled Part 5
by @eyedreemit for @mariannewest's 5 Minute Freewrite Prompt: https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-280-5-minute-freewrite-thursday-prompt-movement
Parts 4,3,2,1 here: https://steemit.com/freewrite/@eyedreemit/5-minute-freewrite-7-25-18-eagle-scout
Suggested listening:
Warm sleep washed over Raphael that night and he was immersed in a series of vivid dreams accompanied by Beethoven’s “Moonlight Sonata.” Somewhere in the third movement, an incongruent sound had him floating back on the surface of reality. The urgency of tempo, though mysteriously mirrored, was pierced with gasps of random voices and a paddling rhythm.
His bedroom window was open to temper the summer heat and as he shook off the sweat of unconsciousness, he came to realize that a night train was rolling by. Why was it singing to him? What did it want him to know?
He went out onto the balcony, attached his iPad to a tripod, watched and listened.
Must be some hint in the song. Hmm.... Maybe Raphael will be able to breed some ideas while listening. The next prompt is up and ready for you to explore.
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-281-5-minute-freewrite-friday-prompt-breed
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Raphael just might agree. Thanks for delivering the prompt!
I love the dreamy mood you evoke. <3
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I really enjoyed the mood of your piece and was able to get into the whole ambience with the music!
Thanks so much for taking the time to read and share your response, @wandrnrose7. Glad you enjoyed it.
My pleasure, my friend.
Hope you see this and can come!!!
https://steemit.com/steemit/@mariannewest/time-to-meetup-san-diego-steemit-meet-up
It's on my calendar as tentative-- I'm really hoping to attend. Thank you!