Ohooo hooo, what have you done to all this creatures? I found myself in a big zoo like environment full of forms and odors and cultures so colorful that I lost track of whom to look at first and not get somehow disgusted.

But I am not the right critic as your English goes way past my ability to catch up.

I can only say that I am happy to not live in a world like that. My senses would be offended, too much:)

Very interesting narration. Good luck for the contest!