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RE: Day 355 : 5 Minute Freewrite: Wednesday - Prompt: well-being
Well, this writing of yours goes well with the saying "don't tell, show" in that you really created an atmosphere, you really made me (and anyone reading I'm sure) feel some of the pressure and anxiety that girl had... without stating exactly what it was affecting her. It raised questions abour her well-being.
A fine piece of prose.