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RE: Sunset on the Beach - Freewrite
Ooh, hello, Jason!
I like the simple and decisive twist after he watches passively for a while, then can no longer ignore the emotion, so he DOES something.
Nice! At least, that's how I see it. I trust Jason isn't a predator seeking out vulnerable women alone on the beach.
hi @carolkean! You are right to suspect Jason is a good person sitting on a familiar beach. Thanks for reading and commenting!
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