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RE: She’s got it all together now

in #freewrite6 years ago

Oh my!
To—get—her. I would never again read the word together any differently
I love the photo and the fact you know the term "Pacon" white.
And this! This!
Vines growing and coming together around a milky crescent moon hanging low in the sky over the bark-moist air of Black Lake, he pulling me in and whispering we are Twogether and though the word was not scrawled on paper, I knew how he was spelling us in his Morton capped head.
You're a natural at writing. And without #freewrite I might never have found you!

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p.s. I love mondegreens. It "dawned" on me, not donned - reminds me of a Beverly Clearly book (Ramona the Pest, maybe?) - she heard "the dawn's early light" as "The Donzerly Light."

Beaming that YOU are calling me a natural writer :)
Thank you for reading carefully and picking up what lies within the word choices and b/n the lines~my favorite with this kind of creating.

"what lies within the word choices and b/n the lines" - my favorite kind of writing too!(And, you're welcome, and you earned my accolades!)

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