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RE: Tremble | Lola Part 35 | 5 minute freewrite ~ Prompt: wet

in #freewrite6 years ago (edited)

There's that darn phone again. I wonder if this is a trend...

Story Club - Everyone's Invited

Are you enjoying @freedomtowrite's story as much as I am? I always find myself wondering where Lola's adventure will take her next and I am curious if you are too. I wanted to invite you to Story Club where we can share our thoughts on each new part and reflect on where the story began. With @freedomtowrite's permission, I will be posing a few questions after each new part in the hopes of sparking some lively discussion. Are you in?

Part 35 Questions

  1. Lola is obviously going to needs some back up. Do you think she'll eventually turn to her parents for help?

  2. Why do you think Bryon was so quick to reveal his true colours?

If you've found yourself tagged it's because you're a regular reader, but if you want to be removed from these question, feel free to let me know: @freedompoint, @cecicastor, @dreemsteem, @bennettitalia, @thefarmerswife, @thegreatdayne, @scribblingramma, @whatisnew, @quirky.countess, @angelacs, @enginewitty @wordymouth, and @mizdais

Cheers, Aimee

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Q1: Nope, she won't. I don't think she would want to get them involved yet until she has a clear picture of what's going on

Q2: He obviously needs something, I just hope he has nothing on Lola that he can use against her because he sounds devious.

I think you're on to something...
-Aimee

Lol

I worried it wasn't long enough for questions! Thank you!

Are you kidding. My brain is in perpetual motion reading this story. Like you said, it's an ocean of possibilities. 😉 -Aimee

Haha you're right! I'm so thankful you've come along side me with this!

My thoughts on part 35

  1. Lola is obviously going to nee some back up. Do you think she'll eventually turn to her parents for help?

    I think Lola will keep her parents out of the loop for as long as she can but considering Gloria's intuition (with the exception of Bryon) and the fact that her dad is a detective, I suspect they'll figure out something is going on even before Lola is ready to fess up. Hmmm... I wonder when Lola's dad is going to make an appearance.

  2. Why do you think Bryon was so quick to reveal his true colours?

    What ever Bryon is after, he must be desperate to get it which is why I think he switch from charm to chump real quick. He must have either picked up that Lola wasn't falling for his act or that someone tipped her off about him. Either way it seems like this creep is hunkering down for the long haul.

Cheers, Aimee

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