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RE: An unexpected visit | Lola's Story Part 37 | 5 minute freewrite ~ Prompt: quadrillion
My thoughts on part 37
How do you feel about Gloria's reaction to Lola revealing Kyle's letter?
I am a little disappointed with Gloria's reaction. I can understand that she wants Lola to be happy again and sees the reality is that, eventually, Lola will have to move on with her life but I expected more empathy from her, to be honest.
Do you think Mark jumped the gun by kissing Lola? How do you think Lola will react?
I have such mixed emotions over this kiss! I want Lola to be happy and I believe that Mark whole-heartedly cares for Lola but I just keep questioning the readiness. But, maybe this kiss is exactly what Lola needs to pull her out of her grief, to accept Kyle's loss and start down a road towards happiness again.
Cheers, Aimee
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