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RE: Moth to the flame (freewrite Julia #6)
Seriously powerful writing here. I can relate a little bit too much. You are a talented writer. It can be difficult to capture the depth of emotion behind things like this and you did a wonderful job.
Thank you! You know, that really was a concern to me, because I knew the feeling I was describing far better in my head then I could put in words, if that makes any sense...I was really worried if it would be well explained. This means a lot to me, @byn! <3
You did a wonderful job. It is very reminiscent of many times in my own relationship with my husband. You even captured the... I guess violence of his need to help and his unflappable strength in giving her what she needed in the moment. It was really really wonderfully done.