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RE: Rubber Duck and Shit Pool - 5 Minute Freewrite
Oh dear. That is a fairly intense visual! Good writing, but also... ewwwww I don't want to visit there!
Oh dear. That is a fairly intense visual! Good writing, but also... ewwwww I don't want to visit there!
I know, I might've exaggerated it a little, and it's not as dirty anymore at least the surroundings, and the shitty deck isn't there anymore. But I'd still avoid touching the water 😁
Lol, exaggeration is a tool of a good writer :)
I think so too. Useful to give a little spice for the story (shit as a spice is quite something...)