The Slave Of All Masters : Day 216: 5 Minute Freewrite
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Studying physics in the University has opened my eyes to a lot of things, the possibility of a boundless ocean of wisdom and knowledge all combined together, the human race is blessed to have come from here.
Everyday we evolve and there's nothing anyone can do about it, we have many believe that even confuse us ourselves, the Bible believe sometimes antagonize the theory of evolution, and evolution itself is a fucked up something, with the Big Bang Theory heading them all mankind is gradually becoming a slave to his inventions and work.
I'll break it down, right from the industrial age we've become a robot, more work less fun, and our fun is getting weirder by the day too, crazy Shit you see here and there, then the jet age and the information age, Waoh, we've become wired to our gadget and hooked to our devices. You can't argue that point with me you know? Since you are reading this from a gadget too you're a slave.
This is an entry into @mariannewest everyday freewrite prompt challenge
Hey @botefarm, here are some grammar tips for you.
Everyday, as one word, is an adjective used to describe something typical or normal. Every day, as two words, means each day.
If you say THE university, you are specifying a particular university. As you mean university in general, you would leave out THE.
Combined means all together, so you should leave out the words all and together
Believe is the incorrect word here. The correct word is beliefs.
We is plural so you would not say a robot but robots plural.
I would rewrite your free write thus:
Studying physics in
theUniversity has opened my eyes to a lot of things such as thepossibility of aboundless ocean of wisdom and knowledge.all combined together. The human race is blessed to have come from here.Every day we evolve and there's nothing anyone can do about it. We have many
believebeliefs that even confuse us ourselves. The Bible contradicts thebelieve sometimes antagonize thetheory of evolution, and even the theory of evolution itself is fucked up.somethingWith the Big Bang Theory leading them, all mankind is gradually becoming a slave to his inventions and work.I'll break it down. Right from the industrial age we've become robots, more work less fun. Even our fun is getting weirder by the day
too, crazy shit you see here and there. Then, in the jet age and the information age, we've become wired to our gadgets and hooked to our devices. You can't argue that point with me you know? Since you are reading this from a gadget, you too are a slave.I hope that's some help to you, as opposed to being simply annoying;)
Am so grateful, very grateful for this. I can't tell you how happy I am seeing a Steemians correcting my works, I'll take to corrections and edit it.
Thanks once again.
You're very welcome. I trained as an English teacher many moons ago so it's good to practice my rusty skills.
Ah, yes, enslavement to our devices. It's a heavy weight, isn't it.