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RE: Day 401: 5 Minute Freewrite: Sunday - Prompt: hotel, story by @blueeyes8960
Yes, the story seemed to have taken a supernatural bent there at the end. And "saving" does present possibilities for a continuation! I was toying with some kind of redeemption for Susie when she first made off with brooch. But she seems to gotten even a little sleezier now.