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RE: WHY WRITING IS IMPORTANT TO ME - Day 201: 5 Minute Freewrite
I assume myself to be a great writer but the reality is I always get stuck with long and passive sentences. Any ideas how to turn them into short and active?
From my point of view, I think that most active sentences always begin with the subject and usually end with the object. e.g: mary kicked the ball. A passive sentence would be: the ball is being kicked by mary. to shorten a long sentence, one should be able to keep a brief relationship between the subject and the object. thanks for reading @amarbir.
I will keep this in mind.
Thanks bro.
you are welcome bro :-)
My pleasure.