5-minute Freewrite: Prompt - The sky is clear

in #freewrite6 years ago (edited)

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She took a deep breath and exhaled.

It was such a conscious act her breathing was paced.

Her chest felt heavy, her mind in a daze.

She looked up at the fluffy clouds floating in the air as she stood under the shade. It almost felt unfair. They looked like they didn't have a care in the world.

Look at her, she thinks she's all that.

It's always all about her.

See how fake she is. It's repulsive. Ugh!

So many deafening remarks.

So many mixed emotions.

Which ones belong to her, which ones were actually made to her, she couldn't tell no more.

Growing up with mounting pressure, and to think that things would change for the better when she got married.

And now, she has her own kids.

Look at them go. Such wild kids!

She doesn't even bother cleaning their hands!

Why is she so carefree? She must think she's living in safeville or something.

I don't want my kids near hers.

Why is she trying so hard? No wonder she has no friends!

She felt a small tug on the side of her pants followed by a leg embrace.

It was her little guy.

"Hey mommy, I love coming here. I love the playground. Mommy you're the best. I love you, mommy."

"Love you, too little guy. Be careful out there, alright?"

Her hand reached out as her son waved and ran towards the nearby seesaw to join his new found friend.

The sky is clear, it was one of those days when things felt a little better and quieter, and she could slowly hear her thoughts running in her head.

She took another deep breath.

"Hey kids, who wants ice cream?"


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Which ones belong to her, which ones actually were actually made to her, she couldn't tell no more

It's true, the thoughts in your head doesn't all belong to you
We are all connected, and things do get jumbled up

Nice one @alimamasstory

😊

Yea, exactly. Many times when we go through the motions of life, circumstances and people would speak over us, and even we speak over ourselves, so it's important that we try to be conscious on what's being planted into our hearts.

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Hey Mama - paying you a visit. As always, I enjoyed reading your freewrite.

Thanks, Mama. You're most kind! :)

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Once again, love the way you express every single detail though your freewrite. Not sure whether the kids want ice cream but I want. Haha.

HAHA, thanks Mama @iamjadeline. I want an ice cream, too! :)

I’m really enjoying all these beautiful freewrites you mamas are coming up with (I’m still working up the courage to join one) 💖

Heyyyy Mama @wildwanderer! No pressure at all, just join in whenever you want to. It's a stress-free lovely write, it's exactly why it's called a 5-minute freewrite, because it's so that you can let your imagination run wild and get yourself to write a post for 5 minutes of your day :) Can't wait to read your first freewrite, hopefully real soon :)

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