What a beautifully crafted story as always, mój Ukochany!~

As I shall reverberate from our DMs and into the first entry, yah done an aristry of words as always. The first sentences always striking at something being done, for which the first sentence gets constantly repainted even to the end. Especially since the end is italicized and makes us wonder how long time really had passed for then the end to make sense; setting up a temporality that is based upon material events but allowing mental follies to scream about the length of time in between.

Yah did also a fanciful job to look at the prompt drawing and capture that essence with none a fear. The usage of Italics to mediate the passage of the story as it directly opens a field to pear into the mind of the inquisitive wonderer. Which I love how the gender of the wonderer remains unknown but allows a self-insert of us into it; not because you thought it cheeky but you caught our unconsciousness at work at those moments. From the fact we can stare into the painting but be ignored to the fact that we do want to know more but are trapped by the ending to not know what really is there and are lost to the fields of imagination and determination.

And how can I forget the usage of words to help paint us the scenes that give a taste of memories interspersed by time as the words keep going. Also to paint the ghost, “real or imagined,” as the vehicle of the story, a vestige-limb, for the inquistive wonderer’s wished for knowledge is nice. Especially as her and the house are “Réal” as they remain undifferentiable except for the apparition for which they can want to grasp, but the relationship between the two makes them want to know the house as well.

A glisp that’s not chilling for the ghost and abandoned house, but the lack of knowledge about them that mystifies their presence. Where the scariest thing to happen if they do follow up on it is not the interaction betwixt them and the Thing, but that the interaction won’t happen and Horror slowly crumples up the inquistive wonderer - thinking they drawn the spirit out instead of being banished from the mansion.

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