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RE: From "Ragnarok Conspiracy"; Part Two, Chapter 3
There are issues with hyphenation consistency. In this chapter you use "New-Zion" and "New Zion", as well as "New-Babylon" and "New Babylon". In Part 1's chapters the hyphen is not used. In addition "New-Order" was also "New Order" back in Part 1. In all these cases, I would suggest dropping the hyphen.
In addition, there are a couple of other phrases in this chapter that shouldn't be hyphenated:
- computer-helmet -> computer helmet
- control-van -> control van
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