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RE: Ciphers; From "Ragnarok Conspiracy"; Parth Three Chapter Eight
Punctuation issues for the chapter:
- You use "book-shelf" and "book shelf" in this chapter. The actual correct spelling is bookshelf, though it is standard practice to use the hyphen if the word is being split across two lines of printed text, exactly the way you did it.
if Roberts prime concern should not have been hiding his very location.
- Roberts -> Robert's