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RE: Caverns; From "Ragnarok Conspiracy"; Parth Three Chapter Seven

in #flashfiction • 7 years ago

Bjarne might have been through this many times before, he hadn't done so recently.

Possible ways to correct this opening sentence:

  1. Though Bjarne might have been through this many times before, he hadn't done so recently.
  2. Bjarne might have been through this many times before, though he hadn't done so recently.
  3. Bjarne might have been through this many times before, but he hadn't done so recently.
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