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Part One: Beginnings -- Dakila

Left a few corrections comments, not sure I should have done that but you asked here for input, (not sure if that meant all the way back to beginning or not). It was a good read so far and will get myself all caught up on the story over the couple of days. I have not read this one yet but will get back here soon. Thank you for sharing your stories. After I get caught up on this one I will move on to the others.